"Icon Reflection"

1. What did you discover about your writing during this project?

I discovered that i need to learn how to cut back on the ings in my paragraphs and to have strong sentences that catch the readers attention then instead of starting of with a boring fact.

2. Identify and describe (at least) one specific writing technique that you used. How did you use it? What effect did it have on your writing?

In my final draft a technique that i use is the less on the ings and more words that are actions to make the essay more exiting. the effect that it has on my paper is that it makes it more powerful and exciting instead of dull and boring.

3. If you had time for one more draft, what would you do?

If i had time for one more draft i would revise everything to add more of the writing tools in my essay to make it more polished. another thing i would do is to try to write more in my essay so it doesn't seem like its so short.

4. Copy one sentence that you believe is well-written and/or important to your overall piece. What makes it stand out to you?

"If Americas history has shown us anything it is that our future is a reflection of our past leaders."
- to me this piece stands out because it is captivating and makes you wonder if it is true